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Friday 13 May 2016

The room 5 visitor

  Written by Biba and Aleeza





On Friday Aleeza's turtle Dash came to room 5 to visit .  She shivered in fear as all the people crowded around . She slowly calmed down when less people came . We wrote sentences about Dash  when school started . Some sentences were describing a lot about Dash. In the afternoon we looked carefully and drew pictures of Dash .





Here are some of our descriptions  of Dash, the turtle





Rhys - Dash the turquoise turtle turned his head as quick as lightning while sitting on the floor and scrambled all the way across the wet carpet recklessly trying to escape.

Berenger - The large, red eyed turtle crawled to the gateway of freedom, as fast as its clawed, webbed feet would carry it.

Damar - The yellow striped turtle waddled slowly across the patterned floor while swishing her teeny - tiny tail.

Evie - The turtle looked carefully around on the floor for an opening.

And some of our drawings


by Kip

by Evie H.

by Aleeza

by Evie F

by Biba

by Karisa

4 comments:

  1. Hi Aleeza I love your picture and your blog page I like all the techniques you
    used.

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  2. I Love the way Karisa used shading .alfie broughton

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  3. Hi Evie f I really like the shade part on your back. KS(girl)

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  4. Aleeza I really like your shading and you shapes.

    KS

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